Last week during Writer's Workshop, we learned how to take our small moment ideas and write them in a step-by-step way. We learned how to slow the moment down, see the "movie" in our mind, and tell true, exact details about what happened. We learned that good personal narrative writers tell lots of specific details - what they're thinking, what their hands are doing, what their face looks like, what they're feeling, what they see. Here are two examples from our Room 241 writers...
This is one of Ben's entries from last week. Boys love to write about sports, and I thought Ben did an excellent job of zooming in on the most important part of his story. I love all the exact details that he includes.
This is an example from Alaina's notebook. She did an incredible job of taking an ordinary, small moment and turning it into a beautiful piece of writing.
Students have now selected a small moment from their writer's notebook that they want to work into a published piece. We'll spend the next few weeks drafting, revising, and editing this one writing piece. This week we're learning how to use timelines, quotation marks, and effective leads as we begin drafting our stories. I can't wait to see what our students will write!
This is a drawing from Richie's math notebook. He's drawn a picture to explain how 277 + 58 = 335. Notice how he groups the ones together to make a ten, then moves the ten over with the other tens. Then he groups 10 tens together to make a 100, and then moves that one hundred over with the other hundred.
This is a drawing from Emma's math notebook, where she is explaining what happens when you subtract 158 from 243. Notice how she takes a ten and moves it over to the ones, creating 13 ones. Then she moves a 100 over to the tens, creating 13 tens.
Allison is getting her cards ready for a math game.



