Close Observations

Writers are people who make close observations. We read the picture book NIGHT IN THE COUNTRY and hypothesized that Cynthia Rylant's notebook was probably filled with very close observations before she wrote that book. We decided to practice this strategy by visiting the playground. Each student found a quiet spot and set out to make really close observations. Here's what Amy wrote on her first day...

Don't you love how she wrote that "the sun was sitting right next to me"? What a great example of personification! Everyone in the class also liked how she used strong words like "sway," "crinkling," and "gentle." We also noticed how she used a simile comparing the sky to a blanket.

After studying Amy, Justin, and Caroline's writing, we set out to the playground again to make more close observations. Here's what Virginia wrote today:

I love the way Virginia takes risks in her writing. Her closing sentence is incredible - comparing two opposite ideas that bring home a solid feeling (just like Amy did in hers!). I also love the way Virginia focuses on the light. She's noticing things other people wouldn't notice, and the words she uses to capture her surroundings are poetic.

Encourage your kids to be noticers of the world. A writer's notebook gives us a place to slow down and notice. I think you'll be surprised at all the ideas that are around you.