I step up to the plate. I tap on it three times. I hold the bat up. I squeeze the bat tight. I say to myself, "This is it. End of the game. Sixth inning. We are losing by one. There are two outs." "Come on, Dolan! Home run!" screams my coach. The pitcher winds up. The ball comes slowly out of his hand . "Whoosh" goes the ball. Then suddenly - dinnnng! The ball echoes through the air. "Run, Dolan, run!" I run as fast as I can to first...to second...to third...to home!! I had done it! A home run! The A's win!!
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Saturday, September 26, 2009
My Home Run by Dolan
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2 comments:
Yay, Dolan! I feel like I am running around the bases myself! I've never hit a home run (I was benched in church softball), but now I feel like I have. Thank you for the fun moment.
It was great to read about your home run ! You sound almost like a journalist !
Looking forward for more !
Théo and Françoise
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